Sneak Peek: Second Chances

Second Chances


Jason R. Peters

First, Brian broke his right arm playing basketball. Then he was fired.

Not in so many words of course, but that’s what it amounted to anyway.

“I’m sorry, but we have to respect the wishes of our client.” That’s what Jennifer, from the temp agency, had said. Brian’s job was to load boxes from a warehouse onto delivery trucks, and a broken arm was no asset. It was, quite literally, adding insult to injury.

Of course, the agency promised to line up another job soon, but Brian had heard that before; he was not anxious to spin that roulette wheel again. Particularly with a broken arm.

The doctor had put him in a cast and seemed optimistic for a full recovery in six weeks. In the meanwhile, Brian had no income.

Because the injury hadn’t happened at work, he couldn’t claim worker’s compensation. And like many, Brian’s temp agency didn’t offer benefits, including short-term disability.

Brian wandered the streets of Chicago with his head down and his collar up, an ineffectual shield against the wind. Keeping your head lowered made it that much easier to avoid eye contact with panhandlers and street peddlers. There were fewer today than usual. It was a bitter cold October day, even for Chicago.

“Wanna buy some souls?”

One enterprising soul was out in spite of the weather, wrapped in multiple layer underneath a fashionable tan trench coat. He sported thin sunglasses, despite the overcast heavens and the late hour.

Caught off guard by the question, Brian stumbled to a halt.

“Do what?” he asked, eyebrows climbing.

“I said, ‘Do you wanna buy some souls?'” the man repeated patiently, emphasizing the last word with relished sibilance.

Brian thought of himself as part of the working class, a salt-of-the-earth guy, in touch with the common man. He’d worked with all races and colors and had picked up cusswords from half a dozen languages, but this pusher’s slang was completely foreign to him. Brian glanced around to see if anyone else understood, but all passersby made a wide circuit around them. Brian envied their distance.

“Look, whatever drugs you’re selling-” he began firmly, but he was cut off.

“Will you shut up with that?” the vender hissed, glancing nervously around. “Did I say drugs? No. I said souls. Mortal souls, brother, like the kind Jesus and the devil use to play chess.”

Though he was amused by the religious imagery, Brian was no closer to understanding. He started to edge away, but then the man said something which hit closer to home.

“Been down on your luck, brother?”

“What?” Brian said, suddenly conscious of his arm aching in the cold.

“What I’m selling is second chances. For example, you know, get your lady-friend back.” Though the peddler’s eyes were hidden beneath his sunglasses, Brian had the impression he winked. Now Brian was sure he was crazy.

“Yeah, my lady-friend is the one thing going for me right now,” he said confidently. “I don’t need whatever you’re selling.”

“Right, right, I forgot,” the man said with a disturbingly knowing smile. “Well, you go run along to her then. Just remember…you can find me here when you need me.”

Brian moved away as quickly as was possible without seeming outright rude, but the peddler’s grin only broadened.

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  • Mr. Snuggles

    I didn’t much like this concept from the start, but it is (in my opinion) the best flowing/sounding fiction i’ve read from you yet. I don’t think I paused once to have to think about what you meant, or to ponder whether the flow was wrong, or to say “he could have written that better.” An excellent start.

  • Jason R. Peters

    Thanks! Maybe I’m learning.

    Remember, though, anything short of pure amazement falls short of the goal. If it doesn’t wow you, it isn’t good enough yet. Even if it takes me my whole life to get there.

  • Mr. Snuggles

    Lol…I am Wowed as much as I can be without an ending, or even the middle of the story…haha. I really like it so far, but again, we’re just getting started. At least I hope so (:

  • Jason R. Peters

    I meant for all my work, not just this one scene.

    And it is (I’m finding) much easier to write an impressive scene than it is to write an impressive story. I got chills while writing Naomi’s first trip to the clearing, but I was unable to maintain that intensity all the way through Woman’s Best Friend.

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